هُنْــاك ◕◕ هُنْــاك
Posted by Bullet | | Posted On Tuesday, March 29, 2011 at Tuesday, March 29, 2011
She entered that place for the first time. When she put her foot , a bunch of flowers were sprinkled with drops of rain over her way. The doves wings were the roof and clouds were the walls and light was filling the place!
Along the way a tender smile was beaming her angelic face. She felt that the door of paradise is opened in front of her.
" how sweet to dwell here !", she whispered .
While she was walking and out of the corner of her eye , she saw such a dazzling, gorgeous and glorious light. She went to see but she hesitated , got near then she went away!
That light came from a man was sitting in a state of waiting and a strings of beads were wrapping his fingers and his hand was against his mouth murmuring some words and his tears were rolling down over his face in silence. When she saw him, suddenly, tears spilling over her eyes, running down her cheeks. Twice she opened her mouth but no words came out and she didn’t know why. He saw her crying. " such lovely pearls falling down from your eyes " , He said and gently smiled.A smile of two months baby was covering her face shyly.
" if I collect your tears , oh I mean your pearls , surely I'll build a nice house to live in with my sweetheart" , he sighed.
" where is she?", she asked.
" I don’t know ! I'm staying here and praying Allah to be with her soon", A sort of distress appeared on his face.
" what about you? It's the first time to see you here"?
" yes , me too I'm searching for my lover",
" how come"!? he must do miracles in order not to lose you"!
An angel was listening to their conversation , resting his wings and smiling.
"what is your sweetheart name", she asked.
He told her and he asked her the same question back and she answered. After that silence held the place and they looked at each other for a long time. That angel swiftly descended into the place they were standing on ,spreading his right wing and it was written on it her name and his name was on the left one! He, the angel , hugged them and flew!
Her lover's name is (Martyr) and his sweetheart's name is ( Martyrdom) and they were in (Paradise) !
Sad and lovely...
Our sweethearts and lovers....most what we wish for too
what a wonderful story
i consider it as apoem
thanx alot
✿ Whisper:
You know, I wanted to make it sadder than that but I couldn't !
Happy to see your nice comments as usual and thanks for passing by (:
✿ Zeina:
7bibte glad to know that u like it (: I wrote some (poems) in English and maybe im gonna publish 'em here...
What do ya think of my English? :$
I scratched my head a lot during writting ! I dont want to lose my English ):
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Most welcome and thnaks 4 passing by (:
its a nice idea to write
i encarage that idea
im sure that ur E language is excellent
goooooo ahead
i support ur thoughts
thnx alot
Many thanks 7bibte for your encouragement and ur support *hugs*
I will do my best and write as much as i can and post them inshAllah.
(:
من وين ساااااارقيتها!
هاااا
إنو شو اللي خطر لك و كتبتيها
المناسبة
بدنا تفاصييييييل
:))))
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when is our angel gonna come , I wonder
Sare2tihaa ?!!
allah yesam7ak ):
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though I hate details and going deep in matters but tekram 3ynak..
maybe u will not beleive me if i tell you that what inspired me to write it is the pic !!
Yup! when I saw it , I visualized this story in my mind !
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When you love someone and dozens of obstacles , restraints prevent you from being with him/her , you just need an angel likr that one to decended and take you and him/her in a place like a heaven to be with each other away from the stupidity of ur society !
Am I dreaming or what ?!
elmoheem ,
and what really made me write it is becuz I LOVE everything related to martyrdom and martyrs! and like to read about them , learning from their life ,and wishing to be one of them inshAllah (:
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Sorry for this blabbering ! :D
Asalamu alaium,
This is such a wonderful and creative piece. Your writing is wonderful, but can use a little work. I hope you continue to write and believe in the work that you do so you may be successful whether you become an awe-inspiring teacher, nurse, doctor, etc.